This letter doesn't belong to me, I should write it for someone else. It goes to job centers, but it doesn't sound so polite.
Is it all spelled correctly? What could you change? What could you write at the end to help us?
Can someone please help?
, Dear Ladies and Gentlemen,
my children all go to school and currently have online lessons due to the current situation. We have a problem with the devices.
I have 5 children and we only have 2 laptops, but they are needed and used by the two older children. We tried to organize the use of these two laptops in such a way that the younger children can also work on them. Unfortunately, that doesn't work. Often there are video conferences with the school for all children at the same time and then some can't participate. Since I want my children to have a decent education, I don't think that's a good thing. It also doesn't work that the two laptops are used alternately by all 5 children for homework. '
I would write it like this:
Dear Sir or Madam,
my children all go to school and have online lessons (without "currently") because of the current situation. We have a problem with * the * devices.
I have 5 children and we only have 2 laptops, but they are needed and used by the two older children. We tried to organize the use of these two laptops in such a way that the younger children can also work on them. Unfortunately, that doesn't work. Often there are video conferences with the school for all children at the same time and then some can't participate. Since I want my children to enjoy an education that is as normal and decent as possible *, I don't think that's a good thing. It also doesn't work that the two laptops are used alternately by all 5 children for homework. '
Thank you but could you write something at the end? So that they help us like that?
You mentioned twice that the 2 laptops can't be used by all children.
Maybe something like "We need your help and very much hope that our situation will improve soon.
Isn't that bad, is it?
OK thanks
Could you write something else? 😬
No idea, I'm not a typewriter either • - •
Too bad.
