Is this application good? X?

Im
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Application for an apprenticeship as IT specialist in the field of system integration as of August 1, 2020

Dear Sirs and Madames,

I became aware of this point through the newsletter of the community of Muster. Since I really enjoyed the internship that I did with you, I'm applying for this position with great interest.

I'm currently learning the apprenticeship "system electronics technician" that I would give up for this position. In my current training, I'm learning to set up electrical switchgear and its programming. I have a good technical understanding and repair computers, laptops and other electronic devices in families and friends. In the one-year BBS Muster vocational school, I learned a lot in the field of server communication and digital technology.

In stressful situations I always keep a clear head and look specifically for a solution to the problem.

I'm very flexible, because in my apprenticeship I have already been sent to start-ups and assemblies in a wide variety of locations; Seedorf, Waltershausen, Minden.

Since I have younger siblings who I take care of every day and take care of, this shows my sense of responsibility.

I work very often and like to work in a team, which I also really enjoy.

I look forward to your feedback and invitation to a personal interview.

Jo

With this application you are only in the second row. Because you are not conclusive why you want to give up your current education. Someone who leaves the ship despite successful training is also considered an unsafe candidate for the new employer.

On the contrary, you even emphasize the successes and experiences that you have in your current training. That bites.

Br

And various bugs. No time to go into it today (tomorrow yes!). Only one: "Since the internship to me, that (!) I…"

And: terrible, rude German: "in stressful situations…"

Just don't!

If requested,. Tomorrow more.

pk, 30 years student asuf internships / applications prepared…

Im

Hey could you fix the other bugs for me? Would be very nice

Br

I'll try it today or at the latest (!) Tomorrow. Promised!

Br

Application for an apprenticeship as IT specialist in the field of system integration on August 1st, 2020

Dear Sirs and Madames,

I became aware of this point through the newsletter of the community of Muster. Since I enjoyed the internship I did with you, I'm applying for this position.

I'm currently learning the apprenticeship "system electronics engineer" that I would give up for the position. Here I learn how to build electrical switchgear and how to program it.

My technical understanding is good. I repair computers, laptops and other electronic devices in my family and friends. In the one-year BBS Muster vocational school, I learned a lot in the field of server communication and digital technology.

It is up to me, especially in exceptional situations, to keep an overview and to look specifically for problem solutions

I'm flexible because I was already sent to different locations during my apprenticeship for commissioning and assembly; Seedorf, Waltershausen, Minden.

Since I have younger siblings whom I have to take care of every day and which I have to take care of, my sense of responsibility also shows.

I work very often and enjoy working in a team.

I look forward to your feedback and invitation to a personal interview.

Im

I thank you

Im

I would also like to write that during a conversation I would like to describe further details about the change in training, how would you write and in which line should I write it?