Three years always Insufficient in German what can I do?

I'm now 3 years old in German, I'm in 11th grade, I always get a 4 because of what I can do with my work. This time I thought I would get at least 3. I meant because of the cooperation, so I have a 1 as a cooperation only because of the cooperation I have the 4 otherwise I would have a 5.

Here is the text, it was an edited version of a factual text.

In the article "Children and media: Online addiction increases during Corona" by Michael Bauchmüller, which was published by http://www.sueddeutsche.de on July 29, 2020, it is about the fact that nowadays young people can quickly become trapped in the online world.

In the last few years you can see more and more that it is almost impossible to "survive" a day without your cell phone or the internet. It is becoming increasingly clear that one has come into contact with cell phones, tablets and laptops since a young age. Those most affected by online addiction are those between the ages of 10 and 17. At least that's what a study says.

Statistics say that nowadays addiction has increased by 75 percent because of the restricted contact. The potential of some young people is often neglected because they can't escape online addiction. The first warning signs for the dependence on cell phones and the like are to escape reality and also to reduce stress. In order to prevent something like that, parents should put restrictions on surfing the Internet. The rules were not stricter during the Corona crisis, but people turn a blind eye every now and then.

Many parents have no choice but to give the kids a look at the television. In every second household there's no time limit for using the mobile phone. Claims Rainer Thomasius, head of the addiction area at the Hamburg University Clinic. Thomasius thinks that it is important to do something about it. Daniela Ludwig (CSU), drug commissioner of the federal government, is of the same opinion. According to a study, one half million teenagers have online habits classified as "risky". Three percent of ten to 17 year olds have an online illness.

There are now many different websites for online help. Every family should have age-appropriate media usage. Children younger than 3 should not have any contact with screen media.

In conclusion, the experts say that children should have time limits for online use of cell phones, televisions, Ipads and laptops at a young age. If you have an online addiction, you can ask many university websites for help.

Improve collaboration by reporting to the homework review right at the beginning of each hour
If you get a bad grade (such as the text) go straight to the teacher and ask her what exactly you did wrong / what you need to work on
Every now and then go to the teacher after the lesson and ask how your work was today
Read a lot!
Private tutoring?

Nicely worked out. DH

If you have learned German as a foreign language, the text is quite neat, but still too flawed. Should you, however, be born in D or Having grown up, in view of the countless errors (pronouns, sentence constructs / syntax, terms, grammar), the question arises whether you have a reading / writing disorder. Your test contains mistakes that a fifth grader would not make. And I don't even want to use "das / that" or missing hyphens etc. In other words, the assessment is correct from my point of view. You either urgently need tutoring or medical support.

If it's because of the cooperation, then you can't really do anything, then you are either too unfocused, do other things you shouldn't be doing or something.

The text in general is not bad, but a summary of an article we have at least learned should be +/- 90 - 120 words if possible.

Are you 15 years old and in the 11th grade? How does the Austrian school principle work?

In general, you have a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes in the text. Maybe tutoring would be appropriate.

And how you collaborate is up to you, how you are prepared for the class.

Are you 15 years old and in the 11th grade?

Theoretically possible if the birthday is in the second half of the year and enrollment took place at the age of 5 years plus 9 months or so upon request. Classes in A start around mid-September.

I come from Austria and I was born there too, but my parents are from Bulgaria

And I explained it wrongly I have a 1 in the cooperation and it saves me that I don't get 5 that is every year and I want to change something about it

And I explained it wrongly I have a 1 in the cooperation and it saves me that I don't get 5 that is every year and I want to change something about it

And I explained it wrongly I have a 1 in the cooperation and it saves me that I don't get 5 that is every year and I want to change something about it

We had to do 300

And I explained it wrong, I have a 1 in the cooperation and it saves me that I don't get a 5 that's every year and I want to change something about it

Is there anywhere online tutoring that is not expensive

Every now and then go to the teacher after the lesson and ask how your work was today

Yes, a lot of us did that who felt that they had received unfair marks

Annoying kids.

Life is hard

Which is positive, you seem to be really trying. You put the whole text in here (typed or dictated?) And you have dealt with the answers here quite a bit. Both go together with your obviously very good cooperation.

Now we come to the problematic points: it was correctly noted here that you obviously have difficulties with the so-called linguistic norm. This means how to speak or write normally and thus correctly.

but if I saw that correctly, no one said that you did not keep your distance when responding to this text. You have reproduced the text in parts, if I see it correctly.

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In the last few years you can see more and more that it is almost impossible to "survive" a day without your cell phone or the internet. It is becoming increasingly clear that one has come into contact with cell phones, tablets and laptops since a young age. Those most affected by online addiction are those between the ages of 10 and 17. At least that's what a study says.

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here you sometimes don't even know who is actually speaking or writing here. In addition, you do not go into enough detail about the writing activities. An analysis always consists of the fact that you are not reproducing something, but rather that you determine what is actually being done in the text and with what content.

So it would be good if you could put the text template for your work here as a good photo. Then you can judge it better.

Take a look, here is a video that goes into these car activities to watch out for:

Describe factual train of thought? "No problem when mentioning the" author activities "

Unfortunately, we only get the school work back in December due to Corona

Did you watch the video?

You are exaggerating, see "Fifth Graders". And I just find the last remark unnecessary.