Can you please improve me or help me (English)?

The colored cartoon is showing an examination room. In the right side of the cartoon is a blue man in yellow pants, gray tshirt and red shoes with an earth as an head and a red thermometer in his mouth sitting on a blue examination table. In the upper right corner is a gray picture frame on the wall and in the left side of a cartoon is a doctor in green medical clothing an white medical grown with an black stethoscope on her neck. The doctore is holding a notebook in her hand where is standing "symptoms -global warming -Mealting ice -Higher Seas -Heavier Rain". In the upper left corner of the cartoon is also a gray picture frame on the wall with letters on it. In the underground of the cartoon is a text where "Your results are back. It's climate change. Just how many greenhouse gases have you been consuming" is standing.

Sounds pretty good except for a few little things. Instead of: "In the right side… / In the left side…" I would write: In the right / left Part of the cartoon.

a black stethoscope and an black stethoscope are two different things, in some places I think you may have mixed it up. You have to go over it again. Otherwise it sounds very good. LG

I thank you!

The colored (= AE; BE = colored) cartoon is showing a (RS; grammar) examination room. In (preposition) the right side of the cartoon (comma) (A word is missing here.) Is a blue (blue = color) man in yellow pants, (indefinite article) gray tshirt (RS) and red shoes with an earth (planet earth) as an (RS; grammar) head and a red thermometer in his mouth sitting on a blue examination table. In the upper right corner (Komma) (Here a word is missing.) Is a gray picture frame on the wall and in (preposition) the left side of a cartoon (Komma) (Here a word is missing.) Is a doctor in green medical clothing an (RS) white medical grown (RS) with an (RS; grammar) black stethoscope on (preposition) her neck. The doctore (RS) is holding a notebook in her hand where is standing (grammar; wording) "symptoms -global warming -Mealting ice -Higher Seas -Heavier Rain" (RS; quotes always in English). In the upper left corner of the cartoon (comma) is also a gray picture frame on the wall with letters on it. In the underground (word) of the cartoon (comma) (A word is missing.) Is a text where "Your results are back. It's climate change. Just how many greenhouse gases have you been consuming" is standing (grammar; wording) .

Have you actually read through the answers to your last cartoon / image descriptions and did you follow the links to "useful phrase" for image descriptions once? I don't think so, because you are still making the same wording mistakes. Pity!

You can find tips and twists on English image descriptions under the following links:

- ego4u.de/de/cram-up/writing/picture-description

- fosbosenglisch.de/new/

- English - Aid.de/en/words/describing_pictures.htm

The most important tenses in an English image description are the Present Progressive / Continuous (dynamic verbs: actions); for the description of what happens in the picture) and the present simple (tripod verbs: verbs of the saying; for the statement; say, tell, ask, seem etc.)

Danger:

in the picture / photo means in the picture / photo

This is often done wrong!

The bold must be corrected. I hope I haven't missed anything.

For the vocabulary and spelling I recommend a good (online) dictionary, e.g. Pons.com,

for the grammar ego4u.de and englisch-hilfe.de - and stay away from the Google malevolent and his trolling colleagues!

:-) AstridDerPu

PS: The picture would not be bad!

PS: The indefinite article (one, one, one) is called 'a or an' in English.

a before nouns that begin with a consonant:

I have got a car.

Before nouns that start with a vowel (self-sound = a, e, i, o, u)

the indefinite article is called:

I want to eat an apple.

The decisive factor is not the first letter of the noun to which the article refers,

but the word that is directly behind the article.

For example:

I have an old car. And I want to eat a green apple.

Whether a or an is used before nouns and other words depends not only on the spelling, but also on the pronunciation.

So it says:

I see you in an hour - because the h in hour is not spoken, but is silent and the word is thus addressed with a vowel.

It also says:

The soldier has got a uniform - because it concerns you like ju, i.e. With a consonant.

In contrast, it says

I have got an uncle - because the you is pronounced like a here, i.e. Like a vowel.

The same rules apply to the specific article the. The [ðə] -----> thi [ði:] is pronounced in front of the spoken vowel, the in front of the spoken consonant.

You can't be serious can you?!

Thank you for the effort!