Yesterday my friends and I wrote a song and recorded it with a program on the laptop. We had only a few hours therefore so far not perfect and would not have much text, but I would still like to hear your feedback because we want to do more in the future. ๐
the link:
https://soundcloud.com/...nge/stay17
The sound is quite ok, but the vocals are absolutely through the nose. Please disassemble your teeth while singing.
How do you mean?
Voices are good. But overall, it sounds too long to equalโฆ
More variety and more music.
Written yesterday and already published today? That's just the way it sounds. (My personal opinion.)
On the whole, unfortunately, the whole thing is just boring. The sound, the instrumental accompaniment, the rhythm and finally the vocals. Unfortunately, one does not feel like listening anymore.
Maybe you just take more time and get to know the music making program better. You can certainly get some out there. (If necessary, get some fresh ears.)
All in all, that sounds like very simple bar music for me. Namely, where nobody respects the background music anyway.
