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ariyahFeeble

3 years ago

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Dear Mr. Muster,

Thank you for asking, I had a good vacation. (I was asked if my vacation was good)

If it would suit you, I would come to pick up the laptop on Wednesday May 5th, 2021 at around 3 p.m.

NoaBroker · Answer 1 · 2021-04-30T12:42:35+00:00

Dear Mr. Muster,

Thank you for asking, I had a good vacation. (I was asked if my vacation was good.)

If it would suit you, then I would come to pick up the laptop on Wednesday, May 5th, 2021 at around 3 p.m.

MinorElderly544 · Answer 2 · 2021-04-30T12:44:25+00:00

Thank you for asking, the holidays were relaxing (or were nice).

I would like to pick up the laptop on Wednesday, May 5th, 2021 around 3 p.m.

Please let me know if this is possible on this date.

Nina53 · Answer 3 · 2021-04-30T12:46:09+00:00

I was asked not me!