Opinion about my first editing?

Thank you very much for the kind and helpful comments under my last 2 questions! I took everything to heart and tried Lightroom. I ask for opinions. As I said my first try would ask to see it on my cell phone! There's hardly any difference on a laptop…

Light and quality has improved a little in my eyes and it doesn't rustle so much anymore ^^

It looks very good for a first try (I don't know the original now, but that's definitely not bad, what I see here)!

Do you see on my profile and thank you! ^^

I personally would have increased the sharpness slightly because the focus does not fit 100% but is complaining at a high level.

Good composition, nice play of colors. I think it's good and especially interesting. Because with such classic motifs it is not automatically given that you are really interested.

I give it a thumbs up and a like.

I just looked. Yes, your result is much better! 👍

Thanks a lot! I'm really happy about this positive review

I might make it a little lighter. But just maybe, you would have to see how it works. But if you are going to print something that I would have done in your place, it would be better to lighten it rather than darker it.

Have looked at your other questions, definitely have the best editing compared to the others who tried this photo

Thank you so much!

Thank you! I'm so happy right now! Since I'm not even 15

At first I thought it was very appealing (yes, a little sharper, but it turns easily if you turn too much).

Then I saw the original on your other post. I think that's a good thing in terms of saturation. Since you have rather strengthened a little too much color.

But it's also a matter of taste. Experiment further in LR, there's a lot to get out of it. Good start so far 👍

I like it very much. Compared to the original image, the (slight) overexposure was eliminated and the noise was greatly reduced. Overall, the processing is rather inconspicuous (which is good!)

The only thing that I might do differently is (as another user said) to decrease the saturation somewhat. However, this is only noticeable in a direct comparison with the original picture.

Overall, the workmanship is good, I like the contrast and the brightness of the butterfly wings and the flower. Did you adjust the colors manually or automatically? I usually use the PhotoWorks editor, there are both options, but more often I choose the layers manually.